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Becky! Where on earth do you live? It looks so amazing! :o I'm so jealous about the snow! I've only ever seen snow when I was very very little on ...

Hey I'm Mia. :) The fainting sun was giving its last try to push through the cover of gray clouds, and the wind blew in all directions. I think the ...

Hey, Mia here as requested. :) I took a bite from my bread and turned to nudge the man behind me “Sensei, sensei. Wake up, sensei!” I bellowed, very close ...

Hey! I'm Mia! :D You're my first review as a purp (instructor). xD Grammatical mistakes/ nitpicks The three most popular girls in the school. Replace 'in the' with either 'at' ...

Anyone else want reviews? ^_^

Mars! I'm still going: How... What... Wow! Aaah! Amazing job dear! You rock my socks! xD I still don't know how you did it, but I'm loving you for it! ...

Anna! :D Mia here as requested! Grammatical mistakes/ nitpicks I could only find two! :O I feel as if I've failed you as a reviewer. xD Roxy nodded feebly and ...

Hey Ofir, I'm back for chapter 3. Grammatical mistakes/ nitpicks I landed on my right arm. It hurt, but I didn't have much time to acknowledge the pain. Please don't ...

Hey Olivia, I'm Mia. :) I can't really give this a lengthy review, since it is so short. Words were not his friend and, more often than not, they failed ...

Hey I'm Mia. This is way too small to be a chapter, it's not even really long enough to be a short story, it's only two paragraphs! :S On to ...

Hey, I'm back! Sorry this took so long. :oops: Grammatical mistakes/ nitpicks I ducked as soon as I heard the crash. I squinted, listening carefully to the explosion, trying to ...

Stella! I really liked this! (Although remember I know squat about poetry) I loved the story behind it. She had someone she depended on, and whom she loved, but soon ...

Hey I'm Mia and I will be reviewing this today. :) Grammatical mistakes/ nitpicks Black military boots pounding on the white linoleum floor, General Fredrick Saloman flashed his pass to ...

Forever Threnody -> Done :)

Hallo! Mia here as requested! *Hands Forever Threnody a purple cookie* ^_^ I couldn't find any big mistakes, so I became a bit mean and nitpicked the entire piece. :twisted: ...