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Re: Escaping the Lost City....
hello! Your second comment haha! Lucky me :D I probably should not be commenting on this because I've read it a bit more than a few times ;) (But I ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: The Sims and You
hahahaaaa I loved reading this.. it was hilarious! This is exactly how I feel wen I play! It can be so frustrating...taking an hour to walk to the front door, ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: She smelled of death
I LOVED this poem! The darkness in it really showed and it made the entire thing great! I loved the ending, it was amazing! It just built to a climax ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Change, chapter 1
This chapter does not really have anything to do with fantasy.. but the story itself does and this is just the beginning of it :) Any reviews are appreciated :D ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Shift
It was an interesting short piece... but that's the thing... EMPHASIS on short! I really can not tell where the story is going... Is the main character a shape shifter? ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: The Diary
This is good as far as a person's diary goes, it reminds me of something I would write in my diary. But the thing is, it needs to be more ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Undiscovered
wow! I really enjoyed that... I take it Lunette's an elf? This story reminded me of the series of Artemis Fowl! Great job :D Does the story continue? Hope it ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: The prologue of 'change'
Here you go, please read and enjoy :) This is the corrected version ! Prologue Waves battered a lone white building which stood somewhere along the coast of the Mediterranean. ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
I enjoyed the plot alot, I like the character Remiel but I especially like the bartender and his accent, reminded me of an irish accent. I don't really have any ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse (redone)
I enjoyed reading ALL of that! It's very captivating, like it makes you feel as if the character is talking to YOU! Clover's personality is hilarious, how bad things always ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: A Memoir
hahahaaa! That was really good! At the beginning I was sort of thinking: oh no it's a really sad poem and it's about child abuse or something like that and ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: My notebook
Hello WOW I was very impressed by that poem. I love poems that have the whole rhyming scheme, it impresses me how someone could stick to the theme of the ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: hi , everybody?
Hi, this is a random post to say hey, i just joined.. i like to write fantasy and am actually writing a fiction story! wat about you guys?
Feb 1, 2009
