mimimac

hi! That was awesome! I'm a big twilight fan but I have to agree with you and say at times it is RIDICULOUS. Also it is definitely cliche! You really ...

heey When I saw how short this was I was like: pfft -.- HOWEVER... it was hilarious! I'm peronally a big twilight fan so all this was an awesome joke ...

hahahhaaa H I L A R I O U S honestly! I loved the complete and utter random-ness of it. My fave character was random guy 2 because he just ...

hey Pretty good dialoague between the characters... you made it actually interesting to listen to a sock named sock-ee (very original by the way ;)) talk. My favourite 'character' was ...

hahaa this was greeat! I loved the story... and all the dialogue! Death rocked ;) xx mimi xx

Amazing poem. It flowed really well and the rhyme scheme was awesome! I love the idea of the 'retired pen' keep it up! xx mimi xx

This was reeeal good! It gave a clear insight into the guy's mind and how he suffered as a kid :( Was sorta shocked at the end where we see ...

Wow Honestly, that's all I can say. I nearly teared up! And for me that's reallyyy saying something!!! When I read this I kept thinking about my best friend (i ...

Maeve shivered as the wet grass beneath her bare feet brushed against her ankles. The sunlight was being blocked out by the surrounding trees which were shielding the warmth the ...

Hey! This was really awesome =] I loved the rhyme scheme but there were some lines where it seemed a bit forced to me. What I really loved was how ...

heey Nice one :) It seemed a lot like a story in the shape of a poem which was awesome, it really seemed like you were talking to david :D ...

Enjoy and review :) :) Maeve shivered as the wet grass beneath her bare feet brushed against her ankles. The sunlight was being blocked out by the surrounding trees which ...

heeey millie... AWESEOMEE job hun :) I loved it ALL except for when you shorten 'th' doesnt make sense because you arent cutting out a sylable at all.. sry xD ...

This is the first proper poetry I ever wrote... so comment away :) Alcohol Wherever you go, you hear me. Wherever it is… I interfere. You hear my siren song ...

Okay, so the beginning of the prologue is either this: Waves battered a lone white building which stood along the coast of the Mediterranean. The outside walls were covered with ...