mimimac

Hey, I'm going to review chapter one today. Chapter One The contract, is it worth the price? to give up your humanity for power? To become an elite? In Ira ...

Hi, I'll be reviewing this today, I'm only going to be doing the prologue bit for now because I don't have much time. I'll come back and continued tomorrow or ...

Hey! All in all this was an OK piece. To tell you the truth it was sort of boring; it lacked emotion and you only used dialogue and did not ...

NOPE! haha Never ever spoken it in my life :P TPBM: loves oreos!

Banned for saying lol! :o :P

Hey! Nice piece, I liked the beginning where she was trying to get herself to write the paper. Also loved how you compared different things to each other... When you ...

hey! Amazing job :D. The entire thing flowed beautifully and I was hooked from beginning to end! The only small thing I can nit-pick at is: They were deceived so ...

Ok... The bold writing are my thoughts.The underlined words and sentences are things I've added and the strikethroughs are... strikethroughs :P Malc; you’ve probably heard his name-after all, who ha

delight

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banana (haha)

platypus (what on earth is wrong with me? xP)

Why did I just say the word 'words' instead of 'questions'? :P

Why does everyone keep saying words with 'smart' in them?

juggle five tigers (okkaaayyy? :P)