-
Re: His story.
Please Enjoy. :) *** One, two, three… I counted the waves as they crashed into the beach, eating it away slowly, dragging shells away, and giving them new life. As ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: A new age Atlas.
Wrote this randomly a while ago and thought 'why not post this on yws?'. So here I am.. posting it on yws. Yeah I'll stop talking now. :) “How were ...
Feb 12, 2010 -
Re: Prologue: Keylee
Hi, I'm Mia and I will be reviewing this today :) Before I begin nitpicking, I love your descriptions and the story in general. Great work :) On to the ...
Feb 12, 2010 -
Re: (Attempted) Photography.
I really wish I could make it a smaller size but to be perfectly honest... I have absolutely no idea how :S *face/palm* xD Thanks guys :D xx Mia
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: (Attempted) Photography.
Heard 'Pain' By three days grace and I just wrote the first part down and took this picture :)
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Crismon Pain (Excert)
Hey, Mia here :) Below, my comments are in bold and any added words are underlined. Rose looked out over the destitute land. How long had she lived here? Where ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Arabella (For now)-Prologue
Hey, I'm Mia :) Most of the main nitpicks have been pointed out above, so I'll just give you an overall critique. I understood what you were trying to do, ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: The loner
Yeah, another one of my poems... enjoy. =] He sat alone at home, Each minute a painful wait, The clock hand moving slowly, Each tick lessening faith. Every step a ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: With an Iron mask
Wrote this last night and just wanted some people's honest opinions on it, so I thought 'hey, what better than post it on yws'? xD It's basically about a boy ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: The Official Goodbye/Departure Thread
Hey guys... I'm sure most of you know I haven't been active in ages, and like music I said I'd be back. But the thing is (like her) I've realised ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: green eye
Found a picture of an eye and edited etc. Hope you like. xxMiaxx
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
I'm back everyone, been doing exams, met brother for first time so was busy blah blah .. He's still here but in seven days ish I will be utterly here... ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Mimz's Marvelously Miraculous reviews! :D
I didn't realise anyone else had asked for reviews.. I'm so sorry lord Anzius and *writewatiwant*! I'll give you reviews on other things if you just post them here I ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: Pippiedooda's presents! :)
Pipzie! I need your help! I posted the remake of the chapter one of my story and it got ignored for some reason :( I need help and honest advice ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Hey guys it's Mia, havent been very active the past months because I've been busy with school. I won't properly be active again for two-three weeks, but just remember I'm ...
Jun 13, 2009
