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Re: Black waters.
Please offer me some constructive criticism, I haven't written anything in a while and it felt good to get this out of me. :) Enjoy. The water looked deep and ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Christmas meaning.
It’s Christmas time But the Christmas lights have lost their glow. Those nostalgic carols that once brought so much joy Are now the sound of monotony. Meaningless tunes that have ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Little Habits
My hopes are very simple, A dream rolled into one. Yet fears are more the reality, My dread of what's to come. As a toddler I was oblivious, Innocence clouded ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Let me live
I had always been unsure, Questioned but never dared speak aloud – The doubts that I feared Would leave me in the black pit I had been flung into. The ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: I heart you.
This is another of my attempts at photography. This time I tried something different. :) By the way, if any of you guys use deviant art, a few of my ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: A day out.
Nah that's okay. :) It's what I posted it for anyway, for a review. :) It's Malta, and the first and last pictures were taken from the bastions of our ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: A day out.
These were taken a while ago but I though I'd see what you guys thought of them. :)
May 20, 2010 -
Re: The best friend's vow.
Please read and tell me what you think. :) Rated 12 + for a curse word in the third stanza. xD There are several things I promise you, That I’ll ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Not yet broken
Hey guys, thanks for reviewing this. You all really gave me something to think about. :) I'm thinking of rewriting this again with all your points included, hopefully then you ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Not yet broken
This is just a quickie, and I wanted some of your thoughts on it. :) *** My footsteps resounded along the hospital hallway as I walked. The faces of people ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
Hey Evi. :) Would you be so kind as to review this for me? It's in dramatic poetry... I just need some honest reviews please. :) xx Mia
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: I'll never let you fall.
Enjoy please. :) I’m slipping into the abyss As your hand grabs hold of mine, The cliff does not want to let go The edge is calling for me to ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: The Mask
Hey, Well to be fair this topic is a very overused one. (I've written a poem about masks as well so I would know :)) I like your style, but ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Attempted photography (2)
Well to be honest I like it because it was a really simple line on the ground and from the angle I took it from it looks like a giant ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Attempted photography (2)
I took this photo on the day I left school in the schoolyard :) Hope you like it! xx Mia
Mar 29, 2010
