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Re: Fickle
cool......i loved it!
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Don't Look Back
cool
Aug 28, 2007 -
Re: bitter happiness
Bitter Happiness A flame of desire burns within me To touch your delicate skin To feel your warm breath You drive me insane With all your love talks But are ...
Aug 28, 2007 -
Re: My pictures (Plz comment)
COOL
May 11, 2007 -
Re: Drawings
OH WOW! i LOVE zizou!!!! he's the guy i admire!!!! and dat pic is real good!!! the second guy, lol, it might be ur dream man *wink* very good drawings!!!
May 11, 2007 -
Re: The Black Widow Cliche
this is really good! i didn't think i'd like it so much. this is brilliant! fantastic!
May 11, 2007 -
Re: You Hate Me
thats really good! i'm a bad critique so i wont comment on anythin apart from the fact that i liked it!
May 10, 2007 -
Re: She (or the Whore of Hell)
wow! i really like this poem! thats really VERY good!
Apr 14, 2007 -
Re: the darkness
i think you meant "it hides through out the day" and perhaps you could change "my sweet lady friend" to "my fair lady" i know its much shorter but its ...
Apr 14, 2007 -
Re: Husband and Wife.
o_0
Apr 14, 2007 -
Re: Somewhere Only We Know
hey that was real good! cant wait for the second chapter, please do private message me and let me know when you post it as i dont always visit this ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: A Letter
that was lovely, yes the world is a beautiful place today. whenever i walk around the street is see people who don't seem fine at all, they look upset, and ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Untitled (screenplay)
wow that was really good!
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: Tess's Stuff! 13+ for partial nudity--NEW PICTURES [page 2]!
lovely drawings! i really like your style!!! the last one was the best!!
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: Hero
nice! keep writing!
Apr 9, 2007