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I think this is really good and the like the part at the end where its almost as if Jo realises that her mother didn't plan her and that she ...

i disagree with dreami... i think that that last line is amazing and i feel it actually adds to the poem instead of detracts from it. I feel that it ...

I loved your writing.. i was totally engrossed and i think you should definetly continue it. I especially loved the phrase 'mortals seem to be dying to get in here.'..... ...

The assingment was: describe a scene in a fast food restaurant on a busy day. I decided to do the assignment from an unusual perspective so that my piece would ...

Thanx I'm glad you liked the piece... i really appreciate your comments! x

Does no1 like pennies!!?? They may have feelings 2 ...... i have now decided to defend the pennies to my dying day. ( God am sad! :shock: )

I usually don't like poetry but i feel that what you have wriiten is amazin..... its exactly how i feel sometimes so i can relkate to it well. But i ...

I think its really good and i would love to find out what happens next but, to be honest, i am kinda confused. :? Otherwise i think its really good, ...

I think that it's amazing and i felt almost disappointed when it ended. I loved the amount of imagery in the piece and i feel that this is what really ...

There I was…again…crouched on the floor, in the same old alleyway, surrounded by the same old monsters. Is it my fault? Was it something I did? Was it something I ...

Me again - with yet another short story that doesn't really fit into any particular category. If you think it should go somewhere else please tell me! There’s something about ...

Hiya! I wrote this for an exam question a couple of weeks ago. It's supposed to be humourous, I hope you enjoy it. My old legs hurt as I gaze ...

Hi i'm mim and i've only just joined this site and I think it's amazing already and I'm not even used to it yet! Any way just thought i'd formally ...

This was written when i was 14 so please don't expect perfection. Actually never expect perfection from me! xxx Journey To A Dream This may sound strange, maybe even unusual. ...

I wrote this short story as a bit of fun. Be warned though - some people may take offence. It is only the beginning of a possibly longer story so ...