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I waited for ten years and was trained vigorously. I'd rephrase this as " I'd waited for ten years and had been training vigorously." It works better and it also ...

This story is a bit of a doozie, so I think I'll divide it up into two parts for now. I'll post the second part later, and if no one ...

I didn't read the other reviews, so I may say some stuff other people said. Sam could hear it gorging on the last unfortunate person dropped into the Pit Add ...

Just so you know, I didn't read any other reviews, so I may repeat some things others said. In the heavens, angels of all ages, conversed with each other about ...

I didn't read any of the reviews, so pardon any repeating. “Could you tell me story?” the little girl asked as she got into her grandmother’s lap. I'd get rid ...

Just to forewarn you, I didn't read the other reviews so there may be some repeats. I hope it's no big deal. Because out popped a little crying girl. You ...

I thought this was pretty good, although, I wasn't too into it until the mom went crazy when she brought her friend home. After that I was pretty interested in ...

Just to forewarn you, I didn't read the other reviews, so pardon any repeating. My name is Alexander. My name was originally Alexsandr. I am of Russian heritage. For three ...

Glistening black meadow rolled out past the range of any creature’s sight, stretching far and wide across what would have been a forest had it not been for the deer, ...

Also, to your last comment, about me calling them all male/female vampyres? In the next chapters, I reveal that vampyres aren't the only creatures that live in Lugosi. I actually ...

I skipped school, and started hanging out in alleys and abandoned parks, I understand why a vampire would hang in an alley, but why would she choose to chill in ...

I have to agree with Shadow Charlatan and Bickazer on this one. First off, the science is way off and quite hard to believe, even to someone like me with ...

I guess your right, Face Engine. I just automatically assumed not many people would know about those places and names, but hey, from my neck of the woods it's unknown. ...

My very presence and nature has puzzled the scientist for years You mean "Scientists". You want the plural, not the singular. I felt scared, but there was hardly any activity ...

If you want a good website for names, this is a place I usually go to. It sorts them by nationality, so this will help keep most of the names ...