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Here's part two of the prologue to A Blank Page. I hope you all enjoy. By the way, if you haven't noticed yet, I like to add a picture in ...

By the way, your review wasn't too repetitive at all of what others have already mentioned about this piece, but it's just as helpful! Ah, good. That's usually the reason ...

I'm glad you both enjoyed it! Pandapez: I edited according to what you said and will continue watching for repetitions in my writing. I've been told such things before, but ...

I didn't read the other reviews, so pardon any repeating on my part. So, let's get started! The soft melody of the music box echoed and faded through the dimly ...

This is an idea I came up with a while ago, but I was in the middle of another story, so it was put on hold. I really enjoy writing ...

Sometimes, we think we’ve conquered out fears, only to be confronted by a greater fear. First, get rid of the comma after "sometimes". Also, change "out" to "our". Then, just ...

It was coming. Just like it always did. It always came on the same day at the same time of the day. I shrank back into a corner of my ...

Before we get started, I want to tell you that I noticed you've posted many of your own stories, but you've only actually done ten reviews. Remember to keep up ...

Just thought I'd tell you before you went on to my review that although I have many things brought up below, I did actually enjoy this. So don't feel down ...

Thanks for the reviews so far, and Blink, yours was especially helpful, so thank you. Okay, First, about the ending. Maybe I will just end it here. I was considering ...

Well, this is my story Snow of the Heart. It's the first time I've really written a story with a meaning, but even though it's quite the common lesson, I ...

Hello I am mike, and I am also too lazy to read other people's reviews (even if it's only one), so, pardon any repetition on my part. Besides, two different ...

Yep... I'm not going to read all those long reviews, so pardon any repeating on my part. The chart on the end of my bed said that I had a ...

The man I had just finished persecuting was on his way to jail, and the little girl he attacked was healing. You mean prosecuting, not persecuting. Also, I'd change "the ...

This is the only Christmas memory I ever had: stepping out of the training center. Remember to stay in the past tense. Change "is" to "was". My hands were still ...