mikedb1492

Here's chapter one of my story. It's about a veteran of the first world war named Gabriel Harper. After experiencing the horrors of spending four years in trench warfare, he's ...

It was attention grabbing, and I found it interesting, but there's one thing that bothered me. You use a specific word to often in some paragraphs. This makes the paragraph ...

I thought it was well written and interesting, but there were still a few things that bugged me. I thought the dialogue was kind of corny and not realistic at ...