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I like this poem, but I agree with the others. You should break it up differently. Overall, though, it was fun to read. Keep it up.

I agree too. You and the one you told your secret to might not be buddies forever, and that's when it comes out. Anyway, pretty good. Like the other two ...

That was freaky as heck. It had a good rhythm to it, but I've got one question. Did you say a girl got raped by a building? This is poem ...

This is one of the better poems I've read here. It tells an interesting story and has a rhythm. It was fun and easy to read. I'm going to give ...

I'm not sure what that last part meant about grabbing his throat and green hearts, but then again, I'm not very deep. Overall, though, I liked it. Keep up the ...

Wow, well done. I'm not much of a poet, but I know a good poem when I hear one. You did a good job at telling us what this person ...

Wow, nice beginning. I'm really curious with what's going on in Mutts. The thing that really got me hooked was that part about the mice. Something about humans messing with ...

It was a little boring, but I didn't mind it. It was pretty good. I think I like the other Mutts better, though.

Hey everyone. This is my story about a man living in the mountains going to see the sunrise. I was awakened by the call of a falcon. My eyes fluttered ...

Okay, I tried to go through the whole thing and give you a good review, but I just can't. I'm sure it's good and well written, but the problem is ...

This piece was actually kind of poetic. Especially the ending, in my opinion. I've personally never heard of this idea before and enjoyed it thoroughly. Sarah’s eyes moved down the ...

Wow. This kind of makes you feel weird when you read it, but in a good way. I have a sibling too, and to imagine him or her doing something ...

This story piqued my interest. It was written really well and gave me a quick and easy glance into the world of the Mutt stories. I think I'll start reading ...

Wow, pretty cool. My favorite was the last and my second favorite was the second one. The third one was a bit weird with that blue but still cool. The ...

Holy crap that was good. It was serious at parts but then a bit of humor or lightheartedness came in. I really liked it. Well done.