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Odd how a tag like (Warning: Graphic Imagery) got my attention... Ah well. I didn't read the other reviews, so pardon repetition on my part. The taste of blood in ...

Oh Kanen Renoir, you had me at "steampunk story". Intriguing beginning, by the way. But that too is slipping away. But none of that matters. What do are the events ...

Without considering plot, come up with a title that you find highly intriguing, something that catches your eye and holds you fast. The person after you will then use your ...

Hey M, I didn't read the other review so pardon any repeating on my part. The first day of classes always sucked. Say 'class' instead of 'classes'. Make it singular. ...

Welcome to my story, where I will simply copy and paste the Twilight saga over... and over... and over.

Well, with that title I immediately think this will appeal more to girls than anybody else. If I had to guess its plot, I would say something along the lines ...

Chords twanged harshly through the amp as Johnny tweaked a few from his Gibson. And now you: The one-eyed man shot Caleb.

Terik wandered through the streets of Seljik; hands in his pockets, jacket collar turned up against the frigid wind that blew up from the dirty sewer: he was the very ...

I sat up, and the red linen sheets that surrounded me fell to my waist. It's probably just the nit pick in me speaking, but this sentence bothered me a ...

Thanks for the review, Ankhirke! I'm glad you liked the prologue despite the length. Also, late or early, doesn't matter much to me. I'm just happy to get a review. ...

Something exploded from the trees with a loud noise. I think "Something exploded from the trees" is sufficient enough. The rest is kind of pointless since explosions tend to be ...

longing around while I pressed my nose against the glass of their exhibit. I think you mean "lounging" not "longing". I knocked, despite that Mom scolded me, This was just ...

Sure enough, it was there, right between a two day old Whopper and wilted Wendy’s salad. I put it in the microwave and punched in some time. What is "it". ...

I first found this book in my church's library. I read the back, thought the idea was awesome, but didn't read it. I usually stayed away from Christian books, not ...

My classes get pretty boring at school, so I tend to doodle a lot. Eventually one of these pages of doodles became a bookmark I use. So what do you ...