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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Death Alley

    First off, I'd like to say I enjoyed this. Very interesting piece. All I really have to critique are a couple nitpicks about diction (word choice). And although I'll only ...

    Nov 20, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: How many words is a picture worth to you?

    This is a slight spin off of an activity I've always loved from my creative writing class. It involves poetry, and it involves an image that speaks to your heart. ...

    Nov 20, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Give a Summary, Make a Title

    Nutcracker bombs is the story of ballets, revolutions, and death. Each year on Christmas Eve, a highly exclusive showing of a ballet is set up for politicians, billionares, and foreign ...

    Nov 9, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Oh Glory of Glories!

    Hello YWS. This, it seems, will be my first poetry posting on the site. A year ago, I hated the idea of poetry and only wrote when forced. A few ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Their last words before you shot them...

    I want you to take that gun and shoot me in the... Sorry, what?

    Nov 2, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Book in a sentence

    Ender's Game: The world's fate is put on a six-year-old's shoulders, and we win.

    Sep 10, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: MechaNet (Part 1)

    I can remember the crash. I remember two screams (mine? Or maybe two of the passengers?) and someone shouting, “Oh my God!” (was that me?) I remember the way I ...

    Sep 4, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Most Embrarassing Moment

    ... smashed my face into the locker-owner's sweaty gym clothes and...

    Sep 4, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Your character's poetry

    How about a haiku? It's all I got time for. My name is Joa In Haven's Darkness, I've lived But Light hath found me.

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Darker Times

    I didn't read the other review, so pardon any repeating on my part. Although shadows seemed to leap out at her and tall shabby buildings loomed overhead on either side, ...

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Answer This Question in as Few Words as Possible...

    To give people that unexplainable feeling.

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Give a Summary, Make a Title

    Never is the story of Johnny Nix, a college student pursuing mathematics and statistics, who begins to notice an increasing frequency of highly improbable happenings. With each improbable happening, t

    Jun 30, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: You know you're a writer when...

    You know you're a writer when your best friend is named Pencil, your second best friend, who is oh so close to being number one, is named Paper, and you ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: How to Grow a Demon

    It was all he was able to do, because I’d gone around his head with the tape a few times for good measure. According to my English teacher, the newest ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2

    knife

    Jun 22, 2010


When a person tells you you hurt them, you don't get to decide you didn't.
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