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Re: Chapter One of "Changing Seasons"
Keep going, I want to read more! haha I really liked this :)
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1: When Love Comes Knocking
I love this!
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Secrets Scream (A Prologue)
this is amazing! it captured my attention and it makes me really want to know what happens next :)
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Deeper Wounds [[Chapter 1]]
I like it. You could be a bit more descriptive though and you could make it longer.
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Dreamer - Chapter 1
This is really good and has a lot of potential. :)
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: The Other Side of Eternity
Oh my gosh, this was amazing. You are an amazing writer!
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: California Here I Come!
Something was wrong. I had seen this scene many times before, but something was off. The lights in the nightclub were the same, the music was the same, and even ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: The Story, The Song, and The Picture (prolouge)
This is really nice, It makes me want to read more. Good Job!
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Prologue
LOVE IT!
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Untitled idea
Hahahaha a mermaid! That made me laugh for some reason, but I really like your idea :)
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Another Fight?
I love it! Seriously I do.
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Ending Love In The Rain [DO NOT READ YET:) ]
Not to wreck your story idea but a vampire and mortal in love has been used many times.
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Everything
Chapter 1: Everything The sun was just starting to fall behind the hills. The birds now hushed as night began to creep up on us. I felt a cool, but ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Bricks
I agree with TheBlackSheep the cheese part should be taken out, because it really isn't a strong scent and kind of random (unless cheese plays a role haha) it is ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: Never Meant to Fall in Love
Okay i really like this! It's amazing and when you're finished i'm sure it will be amazing!
Apr 24, 2010