mikaylakk25

I really liked it. Little repetitive with the hot and salty tears but overall good and very emotional. GOOD JOB

Thanks, and about the confusion. I know, I need to write it better, but I'm working on making it clearer. Thanks again

They were gorgeous. The red, purple, and yellow petals blended together in perfect harmony. Each different hue complimented the other. A few loose ones fell slowly to the ground. There ...

Thank you guys for taking the time to read it. It's truly appreciated.

I read the first sentence and I really liked it, so I kept reading. I really enjoyed this. :)

I like it a lot :))

I really like this and enjoyed reading it. Just reread and correct some minor mistakes. Good job :)

I like how you describe things. It's written fairly nicely :))

The sun was just starting to fall behind the hills. The birds now hushed as night began to creep up on us. I felt a cool, but familiar hand take ...

I slowly opened the door. Olga Bernard was quietly writing on a pad of paper. She then tore off the front page and handed it to her assistant that was ...

thanks I'll work on it.

In like sixth grade I read a book called "Hanging On To Max" by margaret bechard. After reading that book I loved it, but I could never understand why. I ...

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I think I'm in love...with this! haha it's really good.

thanks, yeah I'm not very good.