midnightread

Hi ANate145 I like this. I like the way that the mc is Artemis's cousin and is probably just as smart as the young thief. Can't see anything wrong with ...

Hi bubblegum I like this part same as the last one. I have one nit-pick, After eating two toasts I went upstairs to find my schoolbag I have never heard ...

The fifth Harry Potter. I know that it is similar but in the film they have missed bits out, like Ron and Hermonie being prefects. But I suppose that the ...

Hi *writewatiwant* I like the start of this story even though its another vampire story, but hey, each story is different, so what ever floats your boat. On with the ...

Hi Stori I like this story and reading this has made me want to read the books that your story is based on. Is it the Warrior Cats? Anyway, on ...

Hi Lord Anzius I like the start of this story, I especially like the way that you describe what happens to Jari when the bomb hits. I only saw a ...

Hi bubblegum This is a start of a good story. I especially like the way that she has lost everyone she loved, its makes it easier to relate to the ...

Hi StoryWeaver13 I like the story. I think its the beginning of a really good story. I can't see anything wrong with it so I don't have any nit-picks. I ...

Hi MysticalBlood I like the beginning of this story and I can't see any mistakes. I don't recognise what story it's based on, can you pm me and tell me ...

Hi Lumierre I like the beginning of this story. It is obviously about vampires but I want to know what Felix Danielle Hunter has done to deserve to be outlawed. ...

Hi MysticalBlood I like this and as I was reading my sister was playing the twilight audio book so I can make a good comparison. Kelcia is right, Charlie isn't ...

Hi Earthfire713 I really like this story even though the post is only a short one. I like the way that the mc is a leader and a fighter. I ...

Hi Skittles I really like it and I think it could be a really good story. I didn't see anything wrong with it so I have no nit-picks. I like ...

Hi AngerManagement Thanks for the pm. I like the way this story is progressing and I think that you are a talented writer. I only saw a few thing wrong ...

Hi ThePowerOutage I really like the beginnings of this book and I think it's really good. There are lots of young spy like books out at the moment but yours ...