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Hi bhoutris I like this prologue and I can't see anything wrong with it, but I would advise re-reading as it can mean that you improve the post yourself and ...

Hi whatevr88 Thanks for the pm. I like this chapter and no mistakes leap out at me but like I said last time re-read it and you can make it ...

Hi *writewatiwant* I really like this story and I hope that this isn't the end. I like the way that even though Jane is facing her death she won't tell ...

Hi Smexaykk01 I like this post a lot and I can't wait for more. I think you should re-read it as you have missed out some words and punctuation. I ...

Hi XxXDustyDustXxX I like this post and I can't wait for more. I think you should re-read it as there a couple of spelling mistakes that a spell check wouldn't ...

Hi NaRachel I like it. It keeps with the Harry Potter way of story telling so it is good in that respect. I think you should re-read it as I ...

Hi emmylou1995 I like it. Its short and sweet and moving. midnightread :elephant:

Hi bubblegum Thanks for the pm. I like this post, it explains about the mc's past and it helps the reader to understand her more. I think you should re-read ...

Hi brassnbridle I like this post and I think you said that it was a bit further on in the story then the other post. I think you should write ...

Hi brassnbridle Thank you for the pm. I like this post and I think that the beginning of this story is very good and it keeps the reader interested. I ...

Hi Black Thought I really like this story and I think that the way you have written it makes it seem real and it is easy to see in your ...

Hi Black Thought I like this post a lot so I'm going to read the next part and do the review there. midnightread :elephant:

I like the sound of these books, I'm going to have to find them somewhere.

Hi KanenRenoir I like this it made me laugh. I like the way that it is told but I disagree with Jenthura, I don't think the dog needs a voice, ...

Hi MysticalBlood I like this a lot but I don't recognise the book that the ideas are from. It does jump tenses but that makes it good as she is ...