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Hi Way2Dawn Thanks for the pm. I like the way that each prologue is about a different person but it can get confusing introducing so many characters to begin with. ...

Hi NaRachel Thanks for the pm. I'm going to go straight into the nit-picks. I saw a mistake but now I can't find it but I think it was something ...

Hi cubanbigfoot321 I like this post and I think its good. I think that you should re-read your work as in some places it is difficult to tell which character ...

Hi thatboy I like this intro, it sets the scene for the story really well and it makes the reader interested in what is going to happen so they carry ...

Hi NaRachel I like this chapter as much, if not more than the last two. I like the fact the Hermione and Harry are going back to Godrics Hollow and ...

Hi NaRachel I like this cause it is as good as the real thing and I love Harry Potter to bits. This chapter is quite good but I think that ...

Hi RedSun I really, really like this prologue and I think that the rest of the story will be brilliant if it is the same as this post. I saw ...

Hi Mochi I like this chapter same as the prologue. Like I said last time, I can't see anything wrong with it but I would advise a re-read same as ...

Hi Mochi I like this a lot. I can't see anything wrong with it, but I would advise a re-read as it is a good habit to get into and ...

Hi curiousvampire I like this and I think you should continue with it. I also think that you should re-read it as it would help with your grammar mistakes. When/if ...

Hi XxXDustyDustXxX Thank you for the pm, and I really like the continuation of the chapter. I noticed that in some places you have missed words, so I would advise ...

Hi Hiadel I like this. I think that you should re-read it as 1. it is a good habit to get into and 2. it helps you figure out what ...

Hi isabellarivas43 I don't really understand this post and I don't get what it is a fanfiction of. I saw some mistakes so I would advise re-reading it as then ...

The best book I have ever read isn't really a book, its a series of books. Its a old series that my dad read when he was younger and he ...

Hi As you can see I still havn't got a name for this story so any ideas are welcome. Chapter 6-Trouble “Sam, come and have a look at this,” Simon’s ...