midnightread

Hi RedRaven I like this. Its short and sweet and shows that the character is giving up. I think I'm going to go and read chapter one for this. midnightread ...

Hi Nutty You're better at the art thing than I'll ever be. I like this picture, it reminds me a dance some of my friends did. Its a good drawing ...

Hi lunahlove I love this paragraph Iris took a moment to respond, puckering her lips in a mirror. Her hair, a light blond color today, crackled with intensity. Sometime in ...

Hi lunahlove I really like this but there a couple of mistakes. I'd advise re-reading it and possible putting a rating on it cause of the language. I think I'm ...

Hi, I like the eyes espeacilly the way that they shine (I think thats the right word) :elephant:

Hi. I like your style of drawing and I think that the picture is brilliant. :elephant:

Wow Junglelover, this is an amazing drawing. You are such a talented artist, I can't draw for toffee but I'd love to be able to draw even half as good ...

Hi Stori I like this. The animals are the sort of animals that people go 'aw' at so the story is very cute, (I hoped that made sense). I haven't ...

Hi everafter Yes its a morbid story but its brilliant anyway. I do think you should tack on the last bit as it makes the story even better. Your right, ...

Hi DisturbedDisorder I'll go straight into the nitpicking since I'm in a french lesson. I lit five candles that stretched in a full 360 degrees around me and crossed my ...

I'm not really sure what this is supposed to be but someone said it looks like the red is being eaten away by the yellow from the middle. Or as ...

Hi JackpotJohnson I like this but it jumps around a lot. One minute Nate is at home and then there's a nurse with him. I don't really understand how this ...

Hi servant4christ I like the way this begins but the sentence Rina put her small finger to her little bow of a mouth is a bit wierd, but that may ...

Hi Winter's Dream I really like this. I only have a few nit-picks. I don't understand why you have this (!) in your work, surely there should be no brackets. ...

WOW :elephant: That is amazing. You are so much better at art than me. I can just about manage stick people and even they look stupid. What gave you the ...