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Hi Howler I like the story a lot but I think The calmness and the confusion I had when I woke up changed to panic and worry should change to ...

I hope you like this story. It's a really random idea. If you have any ideas on how I can improve it please tell me. Thanks :elephant: Chapter 1 I ...

I like it especially the way you tell the reader about how the mc was born. I can't wait for more so can you pm me when you post some ...

I really like it. I'm not going to nit-pick because I'm not very good at it. I've read what you've put up so far and I can't wait for you ...

I like this. I like the title, I think that's what drew me to read. I'm not sure how But I could tell the MC was a girl really early ...

I love The Experiment and I hope you post more soon. I am dying to know what happens to Wren, Knight and Tommy. I read the chapters this afternoon and ...

This is the fith chapter of the book I've been writing, but I still don't have a title so if you have any ideas please share. Hope you like it. ...

I think Night Terrors is good but it is very very creepy at the same time but that's not a bad thing. I liked the way you showed that something ...

I really like it GoldenQuill and I can't wait for more. I want to know how he got an arrow stuck in hs side and what the gift is. I'm ...

I really like the story so far. I like the way you make it so that she is almost an outcast just because she was born. I think it has ...

I like it Ledge. I take it that it is what happened to Lila before 18 sick years of her life happened (I hope that makes sense). Reading this chapter ...

I love the beginings of this book. I can't wait for the rest. I'm not going to nit-pick since I can't be bothered and I'm sure someone else will. Can ...

Thanks living_is_for_life It was supposed to be Land Rover and I've never been very good at possessives. Thanks for the improvements and I'm not taking it badly since I did ...

I'm still stuck for a title but I'm still writing until I can think of one. I hope you like Chapter 4 which is longer than the other three by ...

I really liked it. I think its better than any of the other Cinderella retakes I've read. I like the twist at the end with princess and I liked the ...