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Hi Kaedee, I really like the prologue. I could only find one thing wrong, favorite purple robes should be, favourite purple robe, no s as its singular. Other than that ...

Hi RangerHawk I really like this post and I can't wait for more. I can't see any mistakes that havn't already been poined out. Like I said, I like the ...

This is the 2nd chapter of one of the books I'm writing. Comments needed. Thanks. Midnightread :elephant: Chapter 2 When I woke up with the sunrise, I could tell that ...

Hi Pretty Crazy, Thanks for the PM. I really like this chapter but I don't quite get the end, is he asleep and dreaming or is he awake and in ...

Hi TreeHugger12,# I've read the Twilight Saga and I think that your version was very good, almost as good as the real thing apart the obvious fact that Bella becomes ...

Hi Vanadis, I really like this prologue and I can't wait for more. I can see that I've been beaten to the nit-picking so I'm not going to bother. Like ...

I love the Bartimaeus Trilogy. I only read it because it was the only thing in the caravan I hadn't all ready read but by the end of the first ...

I read The Graveyard Book in a day cause it was so good. I loved it and if anyone has any ideas for other books by Neil Gaiman or books ...

Hi Lydia, I really like it. It was very descriptive and it made me feel like I was part of the story because of it. I can't see anything wrong ...

Hi Wolfdaemon I like it and I can see that I've been beaten at nit-picking so the only thing I'd like to point out is that it's I do not ...

Hi Izadazzled I liked it but I didn't see any capital I's or apostrophes but other than that it was good. :elephant:

I hope you like this. This post is a lot longer than the Prologue. I would like feed back as then I can make it better. :elephant: 5 Days Later ...

I hope you like this. It is just a random thing that I began writing yesterday. :elephant: Prologue “Run, Uri. Run,” came the voice through the trees. I ran. I ...

Hi rustic_rebel I really like The Guardians. I get the feeling that the characters aren't completly human. I only have a few nit-picks turned to see Will also lying stretched ...

I like it but I found this sentence a little confusing. so I drug my reluctant feet a few steps closer I think it should be so I dragged my ...