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Hi iCarlyfan I love the Twilight series and this would make a brilliant addition to Breaking Dawn. Now, down to nit-picking. I can't see anything wrong with it. I really ...

This is the 3rd chapter of th story that I write whenever I can be bothered or whenever I have some free time. Hope you like it. midnightread :elephant: Chapter ...

Hi PenNPaper, I like the post. I think the way you start it off, with the mc searching for something to eat makes the story feel more real. I also ...

Hi destiny is calling, I really like the story so far but you have no capital letters at all, which makes the story look like it was written by a ...

Hi Bugwhisker, I really like this story and I think I may have to read the actual series. I didn't see anything wrong with it so I have no nit-pick. ...

HI brittany005, I love the Maximum Ride series and I think that this would make a good addition to the series. The way all the characters are in your story ...

Hi Kaedee, Thanks for the pm. I'm going to have to ask you to pm me again when you post more, since I am completely hooked. Nothing really leaps out ...

Hi shubhiloves2write I like the story line though the plot is hard to get. Right, the nit-picks, You have spaces were there shouldn't be and no spaces were you need ...

Hi brittany005 I really like this post and its really interesting. My four siblings are twins so I understand the evil twin thing, which I think makes the story more ...

Hi TheNewHero, I really really like this prologue and I think it is brilliant. I only saw a few mistakes and they can be sorted out easily if you read ...

Hi Ranger Hawk Thanks for the pm. I like this chapter a lot and I can't see anything wrong with it. Sorry I can't be more helpful but I've got ...

Hi Kaedee I really like the beginning of the story. I can't see anything wrong with it. I like the way you make the mc not fit in with everyone ...

Hi Conrad I really like The Ouraul. I've just read this and the first part and now I can't wait for more. I can't wait to find out more about ...

The Edge Chronicles is a series of books written by Paul Strewart and Chris Riddel I don't know if anyone else loves these books as much as me but I ...

Hi Dr. Who, I love Doctor who and I can't believe that David has left. Well on with the review. I can't see anything wrong with it, but you don't ...