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Re: The Janitors -Chap1/Part 1: An Attack-
Hi TheNewHero I really like it. I think that the story has a really good plot. I can't see anything wrong with it so I have no nit-picks. midnightread :elephant:
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: The Dalek Doctor - Part 1
Hi EliteHusky I really like it. I think that you have a real talent for writing as the Doctor. I only saw a few problems and those could be sorted ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Such a Good Boy
Hi Lauren2010 I like this a lot. It shows that little kids remember what happened to them when they were little. It shows that if kids are taught things at ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter
I've got to say Meep, you should send that to J.K and Meyer just to see what they think. I loved it. I may be a Twilight fan but hell ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Two (rated 12+ for fantasy and violence)
Hi GoldenQuill Thanks for the pm. I really like it. I like the way that you write, it makes the story seem more real. I think the way you introduce ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Prologue--From A Mother
Hi ireylcadence I like it I think but I don't quite get it. I understand why some words begin with a capital but not others. I may just be having ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: In Memory of Alexis (Prologue)
Hi shineondiamondeyes I really like it. I want to know more about the mc and what happened to him, like why did he kill Alexis? I can't see anything wrong ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Astianna: Chapter Four
Hi Kaedee I really like it and like before, nothing jumps out at me as wrong. I think the way the story is structured is really good. I especially love ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: They often say, never bring a peacock feather inside.
Hi Kaewrite I really like it. It captures my attention and I think you should carry on writing it. I think that you missed out commas in some places but ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Part 1 to Unnamed (at the moment)
Hi katecull I like this post a lot. I only saw a few problems and most of them could be sorted out if you re-read this post. Every member of ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Intro to Unnamed (at the moment)
Hi katecull I really like it. I only have a couple of nit-picks, mainly that you need to read it through as you're missing commas. I also noticed some other ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: First Blush(Edited)
Hi nativecatcher I really like it. I only saw a few mistakes and those were mainly missing commas apart from and blew little girl’s sweaters should be and blew the ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Untitled (Chapter 1)
Hi Misguided I really like this. I only have one nit-pick I found the supplied I needed should be I found the supplies I needed That's all. Can you pm ...
Feb 12, 2010 -
Re: Swing Chapter 4
Hi Ledge, I really like it. I can't see anything wrong with it so I have no nit-picks. Can PM me when you post more? midnightread :elephant:
Feb 12, 2010 -
Re: Getting ready to die
Hi darkwriter15 I really like the story, but I want to know why the mc is going to die. I haven't got any nit-picks. midnightread :elephant:
Feb 11, 2010