midnightread

Hi tRick I really like it and its got me hocked. I want to know who she was visiting and what the job was. I haven't got any nit-picks. Can ...

I LOVE IT. I absolutely love it. It was so funny, I almost died of laughter. :elephant:

Hi I just got told off for laughing so much and its all your fault!!!!! I'm joking. I love this script, I'm a Twilight lover but I think what you ...

Hi nativecatcher I really like this prologue as it paints a really good picture of what is happening for the reader. midnightread :elephant:

Hi TheNewHero I really like this. Its almost as good as the real thing. I haven't got any nit-picks. midnightread :elephant:

I'm not the sort of person who cries reading hp. My mum was annoyed at me cause I wouldn't let anyone else read it until I'd read it twice through. ...

Hi HannahDutson_x I like this and I think that it has a goodplot but Idon't quite understand why this is in action and adventure. I see that PenNPaper has nit-picked ...

Hi kamorama I like this story quite a bit. I think the way that human and Illusimi are so different makes the story seem so real and lets the reader ...

HI Kaedee I like it a lot and I only have one nit-pick I have never seen one Teleporting should be I have never seen anyone teleport. As per usual ...

Hi AngerManagement I like the name of the story, it caught my attention and made me want to read. I agree with NYCnightowl007, the story is moving to fast and ...

Hi Apollo I like it and I think its good. I can't see anything wrong with it so I have no nit-picks. I like the character and I want to ...

Hi MAri0O07 I like this prologue a lot. I only have one nit-pick and that is my hand hand starts to shake but I fight it off shouldn't there only ...

Hi Lydia Wow, that's a good prologue. I like the way the prologue gets me hooked without giving away to much of the story. If/when you post more can you ...

Well this is chapter four of the story I'm writing. I hope you like. midnightread :elephant: Chapter 4 “My name is Mahir. I help the Witch train the Spirit Warrior. ...

Hi SNDeane I like the beginning of this story. I only saw a few faults and those could be easily sorted if you re-read your story. Can you pm me ...