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This is the first poem I have written since I was about 9 so if it's not to good tell me. I wrote this for a competition they are doing ...

Hi Way2Dawn Thanks for the pm. I like this post but I saw a few minor mistakes, nothing big just some letters in the wrong place and missing punctuation. I ...

Hi linerider I like this story and I think it's a really good idea. I like the way that he is a millionaires kid and he probably has lived in ...

I would recommend the Daniel-X series. It's by the same author as Maximum Ride and is about a boy who sees his parents be killed by an alien and then ...

Hi asxz I really like the way this story is going but I saw a few small mistakes so I would advise re-reading your story and working out the kinks. ...

Hi Way2Dawn I like this story and I think it's really good. I saw a few mistakes but I think you can sort out those mistakes if you just re-read ...

Hi brassnbridle I really like this story, I think it has an interesting beginning and I can't wait for more. I can't see any mistakes but I'd advise re-reading it ...

Hi GoldenQuill I really love this story. I'm completely hocked. Can you pm me when you post more? Thanks. Right, time to nit-pick. I actually can't find anything wrong with ...

Hi GoldenQuill Thanks for the pm. I really like the way this story is progressing but I think you should re-read it as there are a few mistakes, nothing major ...

Hi EliteHusky I do like, you were right. I think the story is good but it tends to jump around a lot, so I don't quite understand it. I also ...

Hi What has the Doctor done to get his picture in shops? And is the Gwen he is talking to, the Gwen on Torchwood? I only saw on e problem ...

Hi EliteHusky I like this post. I want to know why the Doctor is in London on Boxing Day, has an alien invaded or something, and I want to know ...

HI EliteHusky I like this part as much as the first part and I can't wait for you to post more. I think that you may have missed out some ...

Hi Allessandre I like this post. It's sort and sweet but I hope you're going to write more since it's really good. I like the way that the people are ...

Hi, I also noticed the spelling mistakes but they will be easy to sort out if you just re-read your post. I think the plot is, but that is a ...