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I really enjoyed reading this! It was extremely well written! I was confused on whether Mimi was his sister, or the first girl he drove that wasn't his sister. You ...

Wow. This was actually really good! The symbolism completely blew me away! Wow. That's all I can say right now! And you're only fifteen? Great job! Keep writing! :P

This is a really good picture! I wish I was as good at photography as you! The only thing that I found wrong was the name. It seems a little ...

Haha this was cute! I enjoyed reading it! So the whole time, I was wondering if it was really a real list, or if it was just going to be ...

I honestly LOVED this!!!!! I really enjoyed reading it! The concept is amazing! Also I think it's beautifully written! Some of it rushed a little too fast though like the ...

Thanks again! You are a really helpful editor! And I agree that I really need to work on my reality in my stories... hopefully that made sense :P Thanks once ...

Thank you so much!! This was so helpful!!!! XD XD :)

I thought this was really good! I definitely will keep reading if you post more! The one thing I have to say, is that parts of it were a bit ...

This... this, simply put, was amazing. Your description was just awesome! I could really taste the sweet water (I imagined it to have a sweetish taste), I could really hear ...

I think that this could get somewhere. I just think it was WAY too fast. You should deepen and 'explode' each moment even if it is still supposed to be ...

First of all. BRAVO! I congratulate you for not coming across as a whiny little kid just wanting attention as most poems like this come across as that. This actually ...

Thanks Angela!

Ok first of all, I would like to say, "WOW". This is very entertaining and I enjoyed reading it very much! Once again, as I said on your colonial love ...

First off, I would like to say that I agree with VivielTwixt that you should go ahead and 'introduce' the characters straight ahead in the beginning. Secondly, I think that ...

This was very beautifully written! I don't have anything to critique about it except I agree with a few others that it should be broken up into different stanza's. Keep ...