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Oh and one more thing. Was Caleb Walker a real person? I couldn't help but wonder that the whole time :) Once again, great job!

This is just beautiful!! I almost cried at the end! The imagery is so amazing and I could really see you guys together! Also the dates in the big bold ...

I personally only liked the second two. The last one would have been great except for how big the font was. I think if the font covers the whole cover, ...

Thank you so much for that review!!!!!!!! I would have completely missed the September first thing unless you had pointed it out!! Thank you thank you thank you thank you ...

Thank you so much! I completely forgot to add the official coming to her house... I wonder why? I had it all figured out, but it just slipped my mind ...

Hahaha once again this made me laugh! These are quite fun to read! Hope you keep them up! Also you should think about if you do the next ones, making ...

Haha this was actually pretty funny! I expected it to be pretty lame as most 'social-mediafied' books are, but it wasn't! I congratulate you for that! The one thing that ...

AHHH! Thank you so much for pointing the september first thing out!! If you hadn't, I would have completely not noticed! Also I will work on the 'I' thing :P ...

AHHH! Thank you so much for pointing the september first thing out!! If you hadn't, I would have completely not noticed! Also I will work on the 'I' thing :P ...

This was amazingly and beautifully written! I loved how you described this world as not as something that's holding you back, but something that lets you experience it differently :) ...

I liked this but I have to say that I agree with Wranna. It was a bit confusing at the end when you switched persons on us. But other than ...

*POV Mary* Chapter Four I grabbed a hold of the marble counter to keep myself from falling to the floor. The room was spinning and all I saw was blurs ...

Oh also I just wanted to add that it wasn't too long, and wasn't too short. Just right ;) Also.... POST MORE CHAPTERS!!!! I can't wait to read them!! xD ...

This was AMAZINGLY written! I can't believe you're only fifteen! I was a little confused because I thought that it was going to be the first chapter of a book, ...

I think this could get somewhere, it's just that it's not there yet. It felt a little bland and I think you should spice it up a bit. You should ...