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Ok so first of all, I think that this was excellent! It was interesting, not too long and not too short, and it left me wanting more! Great job! The ...

Hmmm this is definitely a start. I didn't absolutely love it, but I didn't not like it either. So what I'm trying to say is, is that it's good. Part ...

I agree with Liesonlies and Paperbackheart that it was a bit dull and that almost all of it was repetition. As far as grammatical errors, I don't think I caught ...

This is beautiful! I loved, loved, loved it! I especially loved the twist at the end (well for me it was a twist) how you incorporated God. It was amazing! ...

This was really sweet! Also it was an easy read and very easy to follow. The only thing that stood out to me was at this part: Do not be ...

Wow. Just wow. This was absolutely fantastic!! I really enjoyed reading it! It was very beautifully written and it was very easy to follow and know what was going on! ...

You dream, Ok so already I'm confused. What is this 'dream'? Dust motes partaking, In exquisite dance, Above you. You slip, At peace, in silence, From this unhappy, Dreary world. ...

Hahaha I liked this! It flowed very well and it made sense! Not any grammatical errors but I do think that it could have done without the (Don’t you deny ...

Ok. So first of all, I would just like to say that this was very sweet! I enjoyed reading it and I think that your friend is very happy for ...

I really liked this! Although some of the personification was a little bit disturbing... that could probably be because I take things literally while I'm reading it, and then go ...

I really enjoyed reading this! It was a simple easy read which is great for me! I found no grammatical mistakes and it flowed very well! I normally don't read ...

I really liked this! I don't know why, but I did xD I think that the shortness was what made it so powerful. But liked it; short, sweet, and to ...

This is truly a beautiful piece of work! I loved the repetition of: 'I sit silently, staring dumbly at the wall' That's what really caused a lot of the emotion. ...

Ok I'm so glad that this was pure fiction! If it wasn't, the person that you wrote about, better be scared :P So I didn't really find much fault with ...

This was really good! It was an easy read, it flowed very well, and there weren't very many grammatical mistakes if any! There is one thing though. I have to ...