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Hey there AncientForever!I really enjoyed the short, sweet, and to the point stanzas of this poem! They captured a dramatic mood very well! Crawl off to sleep with your gun ...

Ok, this was an amazing poem! I really enjoyed it and especially loved the wording you used! It wasn't huge "college words" like most people use to write their poetry, ...

Aww! Thanks for the comment! And yeah, I should have made capitalization, just wrote it randomly :P Thanks again!

hey there pretty girl the one with the white smile, the blonde hair, all of the friends. you seem so happy. every day, you get up, brush your hair, put ...

haha thanks sarah :P

Thank you so much everyone!!! This was the first poem ive written since 5 grade! :) thank you again!!!

Mommy went to heaven Yesterday In room 342. I watched her limp body Struggling As it tried to take in Every molecule of Oxygen it Could, But it wouldn’t let ...

OH MAI GAWSH!!!! I'm so stupid.... so freakin stupid! Thank you so much for pointing that out!!!!!! I think I meant to say '93 on both chapters, but 2003 is ...

I really enjoyed reading this! I love reading lyric poetry because I sort of put the words to music in my head, and then sing along! Everything was going really ...

Thank you so much!! :)

Chapter Five *POV John* “Well where is she then?” I impatiently asked the stranger. “I… I… I don’t know,” He replied shakily. I moved around him, searching my apartment for ...

Haha this really amused me! I especially loved how you made the reader the subject of the poem. It was very creative, and not many people can do it very ...

This was extremely beautifully written! I enjoyed reading every last bit of it and I'm going to enjoy reading every last bit of it again... and again! The way you ...

This was a beautiful and simple read!! I quite enjoyed it! It flowed very nicely and there were no grammatical mistakes that I could find :) Oh and Liesonlies, I ...

This was AMAZING! It was an easy read and quite humorous! (probably my favorite combination :P) The only thing that I found wrong, was here: -On the topic of Chocolate ...