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michaeld

rest a spell

  • Other Poetry Re: I

    Ok this will be really short. First of all, I really loved this work! This was quite fantastic! The second thing that I have to say is that I love ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Black Box

    This poem was AMAZING! You definitely get my "like"! I don't have ANYTHING to say about the story itself, I just have a few grammatical errors :) Here we go! ...

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Woman at the Well

    First of all, this was simply astounding! I love this piece so much it's not even funny! I love it so much, I think I killed it with my love! ...

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You Loved Me First

    Thank you so much both of you guys! It really means a lot!

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You Loved Me First

    Every day, I slip out of the shower, walk to the mirror and look at myself. Every day, it's a new insult. Too fat, not attractive, no cleavage. Every day, ...

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Listen

    thank you so much!

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: a frozen window pane

    I absolutely adored this piece! I'm speechless! Now onto the nitpicky-ness xD I’m the breath scratching the surface I think you should bring the rest of the phrase up making ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Listen

    Thank you so much! I do realize that this did come across as a bit of a short story almost... I really need to work on taking my time when ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Listen

    Mommy told you to stay away. You didn't listen. You ran out the door, ignoring her warnings. You were sixteen, I was ageless. I warmed your heart with lies of ...

    Oct 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Puzzle

    I loved this poem so much! Your poetry is indescribable and I look up to your writing skills! You are very, very, very talented! Now back to this poem :P ...

    Oct 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: I'll Lie

    This was beautiful! I loved every word of it! I did find a few nit picky things though You're too innocent, I so often think I don't know why; Must ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Folded Up

    Simply put; I'm speechless. Your imagery is just fantastic! I loved your descriptive words especially. Most people have either not enough description, causing the story to feel flat, or they ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Pretty Girl

    thank you so much! :)

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: (My Missing) Picture Frame

    the lyrics are beautiful and so is your voice! I'm practically speechless! BRAVO

    Sep 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Saxophones in Fall

    First of all, I would like to say that this poem was, simply put, amazing! I loved the description and the word choice was phenomenal! Jasmine perfumes the woolly foreboding ...

    Sep 25, 2011


“Such nonsense!" declared Dr Greysteel. "Whoever heard of cats doing anything useful!" "Except for staring at one in a supercilious manner," said Strange. "That has a sort of moral usefulness, I suppose, in making one feel uncomfortable and encouraging sober reflection upon one's imperfections.”
— Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell