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Re: 1983
Thank you so much everyone for your helpful reviews! I definitely need to work on this, and just my poetry in general! Thanks again! These are definitely the reviews that ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: 1983
I want it to be 1983 again. I want you to Hold me in your arms, Tell me how the stars Twinkle just for me. I want you to show ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: That's So Gay!
I think that this was an amazing poem! It definitely has a lot of potential. I don't think you need to do anything different with it, it's perfect the way ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Fill-out form for access to Heaven.
This was hilarious, witty, amazing and I would have never thought of it! I've read books with similar ideas and they were pretty much this, but much longer! What was ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Broken
A painting has been made, But this story has a twist. You see, the brush is a blade, and the canvas, her wrist.
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Happy Chapter 2
Thank you for commenting on my chapters!! Now I won't have AS much work to do after NaNoWriMo is over :) I am so glad that you gave me tips ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Happy Chapter 2
I want you to know that I have always and will always love you even if I’m not there for you… “BEEP!” Josh slammed his fist onto the buzzing alarm ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Happy Chapter 2
I want you to know that I have always and will always love you even if I’m not there for you… “BEEP!” Josh slammed his fist onto the buzzing alarm ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Happy Chapter 2
I want you to know that I have always and will always love you even if I’m not there for you… “BEEP!” Josh slammed his fist onto the buzzing alarm ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Scars.
The cool blade slices across the pink flesh. Crimson liquid leaks through the freshly made mark on human body. Chills run up his spine, all the way to his thin ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Happy
Thanks! I honestly didn't event think about it and I know it needs improvement but I just don't know where. This is actually my NaNoWriMo story so I'm not focusing ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Happy
Thank you! Yeah, I couldn't really think of a name for my novel so I named it that.... it will soon change though! And as for the header, at the ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Happy
Sorry that it's so long! I hope at least someone reads it though! Any help would be AMAZING! Mom, I want you to know this was not your fault… Frosty ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Happy
Sorry that it's so long! I hope at least someone reads it though! Any help would be AMAZING! Mom, I want you to know this was not your fault… Frosty ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: swear to me always this day
This poem was amazing! I read it over and over and over and loved it even more every time I read it again! I even read it to my mum ...
Oct 30, 2011
