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I really liked this poem! I think it flowed very well and it had just the right amount of emotion! Great job! Keep it up :)

This is such a touching piece! I loved every part of it! It had so much emotion but too much as to overwhelm the reader. It was just right ;) ...

Thanks everyone!! I agree that it was a bit choppy, but I'll keep working on it :P this was a rough draft as I wrote it a few months ago ...

I really enjoyed this poem! I don't have much to say but I would like to see a little bit more emotion in this. Other than that it was really, ...

This was an amazing piece of work! Normally I'm not exactly fond of the books that are 'journals' as most of them use 'so anyways' or 'ummmm' and 'yeah. thats ...

Thank you so much!! I was afraid it was a little bit too rough because I didn't edit it at all but I'm glad that it is good so far!! ...

Prologue “Good morning sleepy head.” Those were the last words I heard her say before the disaster. She said those four words and gave me a good morning kiss. You’re ...

Sarah this was so well written! I could see every single part of it!! It made my whole day :) thank you so much for being so talented!!

Verse 1: I'm standing here right in my place, I sit right down and then I see your face your face I start to smile but then I cry, 'cause ...

this was so beautifully written that I have nothing whatsoever to critique!! I am extremely jealous of your poetry skills and have been since our 6 grade English class together ...

GREAT JOB SARAH!!!!!

I think that this is truly a genuine piece of work! Although it was a little bit short, I think if you kept on going and wrote more scenes, than ...