michaeld

This... this is just amazing! I am completely and utterly blown away! First of all, the title was perfect to catch ANYONE'S attention! The whole story of the poem (I ...

Ok thank you! I am fairly new to this site, so I don't know how to put them into a 'novel'. But if you go to my portfolio on my ...

Thank you so much! Also thanks for the follow! I'm going to follow you right back ;)

A kiss. Just a simple kiss. And now he's gone. I had woken up early that morning. I don't know, something... something was just not letting me sleep. I'm not ...

This was quite humorous actually! There are quite a few rough edges that I would work on but other than that, very nice job! -michael

I'm literally speechless. This was AMAZING. And you're only sixteen? I congratulate you! BRAVO! :)

This is a very good piece of art! The rythm is just PERFECT! I was sort of singing it along in my head1 Very nice :) BRAVO!

This was very beautiful! I only have one thing to say though. At this line: 'You must chose it Chose to let it' it should have been: you must CHOOSE ...

This was so beautifully written! I could not have done better myself! BRAVO!! :)

This flowed so well and I have nothing whatsoever to critique it! Bravo!

I really really enjoyed this! I agree with Tydecker777 that it is going somewhere and that it would make a really good short story! Keep it up! :)

Hey! First of all I would like to welcome you to YWS and I hope you enjoy it here! I know I sure do! This was an AMAZINGLY written piece ...

I really enjoyed this! The one on the rose had great imagery! Bravo! :)

First of all, welcome to YWS and I hope you enjoy it here! I know I do! All I have to say is a few grammatical errors. When you said ...

Oh goodness! And I thought I was a good artist! Bravo! :)