michaelahart

So I'm hoping I'll get more reviewers soon? Previously on HOR, Kiersten's parents punished their selfish, egotistical daughter because of the treatment she'd been giving them. And how else to ...

Hi again! Here is HOR2, and please, if a better title should be in order, do not be afraid to share! Previously, we meet the main character, Kiersten Kavanagh, her ...

Thanks to the both of you! I've been reading a lot of Jodi Picoult's writing lately, and I've taken off from what she does by skipping from scene to scene, ...

Well,, here's chapter 1 to my new story, Hills of Roses. If you can suggest a better title, by all means go right ahead. This story will be based in ...

Well first off, the twilight stuff made me chuckle too. (: I absolutely loved how you started off. It was slow, but very nice and it even put a smile ...

Agreeing with TenYo, the 'yet' seemed a little out of place at the introduction. In fact, I found the intro kind of... not right? Sorry, lacking better words... It just ...

The introduction, for starters, really drew me in. I loved the way you used your words, and the atmosphere was set perfectly as well. I will point out, though, that ...

I've kind of lost interest in my last story, but might go back to it at some point if the writer's block for it goes away, and if the inspiration ...

This is a new story I came up with yesterday, so I'm just letting it all flow in here. Please do enjoy, and leave your critiques! I do apologize, though, ...

Hi there! So I'm Michaela, but feel free to call me Mica. I'm 14 on Thursday (22nd, yay!) and I love writing stories under romance, coming-of-age and tragedy. I live ...

I found your beginning to be quite good as well. The commenter above me is pretty much bang-on, but as mentioned, I wasn't feeling it, you know? In terms of ...

I'll have to say I agree with Classy. Your writing style is lovely, but I think you've made the story itself a bit too casual. In my opinion, I don't ...

As everyone else has mentioned, that was amazingly written. Your writing style is very, very good. The only concerns I have with this, and yes they have been mentioned, is ...