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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: nothing behind those eyes

    I don't think you guys fully understand this poem. Have you ever heard of the Beat Generation's key masterpiece "Howl" by Allen Ginsberg? This poem was an English assignment meant ...

    Jun 4, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Welcome to the Desert of the Real

    Very well done! You criticize this generation's vices very well. The word choice is superb, and it cuts straight to the point with vivid imagery. I love it! All the ...

    Jun 3, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Magician

    First of all, very good imagery and interesting topic! It's rather unique, and you capture the magician's surroundings rather well. Second of all, i saw a couple typos here and ...

    Jun 3, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: nothing behind those eyes

    my generation, beaten and torn, confined into the straitjacket of conformity, caught in a fine-spun wicker basket insects swarming over, crumbling under the hideous deeds of sordid mankind, swirling i

    Jun 3, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Time is running out -

    tick tock. Time is running out I’m the White Rabbit immersed in academia haunted by competition jaded must go on. tick tock – Time is flying by, so fast, so ...

    Jun 3, 2008


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