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This is quite an English topic, I don't know whether they have these kind of home moving programs in America or wherever.. But this is just a bit of a ...

I just started scribbling this out randomly whilst listening to Ben folds... very strange. Comments please ! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Lamen

If the line not to cross is already behind me, Then which way shall I turn my back? “Continue and do not look back” I shall cliché till the end ...

I like it very much. Just one thing and obviously this is only personal opinion because you're writing it about you and you know what you want to say etc... ...

I really like this poem, I like the fluency and the voice throughout; it sounds real and heartfelt. Plus I sort of can relate.... Just a few things: "It doesn't ...

This is a poem i wrote about a year ago so one of my first. tell me what you think. All in a matter of moments And what I thought ...

Just wanted to say that I love the first four lines of this poem, they are truly original . the way 'Misery' is put on a line of its own- ...

It's my favourite thing- Uncovering the wrinkles on your face, Discovering the frown lines left in haste. I can almost taste Your anger from forty years ago, Like in the ...

Thankyou both for your critiques and suggestions. I knew i had overused the semicolon and the punctuation was quite awkward in places so thanks for helping me fix that. I've ...

If I could sit on that train forever, watching the little girl’s empty but raging expression, I would. Each stop we came to, I prayed deeply that she would not ...

I have to say, I am positiviley enchanted by this poem (very english i know) I have no experience in this kind of thing and am not going to be ...

Forever and a day, the world and his wife cried. The apple of my eye died. I chose to forget you Because it was all I could do to remember ...