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  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: The Traitor Game

    After reading this, I can't help but leave a review for this fantastic, wonderful story. Your story was shockingly original, and terrifying. The fact that you used some young girls ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Christmases Past

    This story has reminded me so much of what Christmas is about - family. The writing was wonderfully done, and you have so much lovely details. [With each line, I ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Dare - Short horror

    That was.. terrifying. It is a compliment. You set up a great atmosphere, and this is one of the best horror stories I've ever seen. So far, original. Very original. ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Graveyard

    Wow. This was absolutely amazing, I must say. You did an amazing job on building the atmosphere, and I love your descriptions. The last part was a bit puzzling at ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Blown Away

    First of all, great job! I really enjoyed reading this story, and it was great. The song's lyrics matched well with your story. But there's some things that if corrected, ...

    Oct 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, Realistic Re: I Still Miss You

    I love this story so much. So far, this is the best friendship story I have EVER read. Good job on word choices, and this is so realistic and draws ...

    Oct 21, 2013


I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom