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  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: The Traitor Game

    After reading this, I can't help but leave a review for this fantastic, wonderful story. Your story was shockingly original, and terrifying. The fact that you used some young girls ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Christmases Past

    This story has reminded me so much of what Christmas is about - family. The writing was wonderfully done, and you have so much lovely details. [With each line, I ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Dare - Short horror

    That was.. terrifying. It is a compliment. You set up a great atmosphere, and this is one of the best horror stories I've ever seen. So far, original. Very original. ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Graveyard

    Wow. This was absolutely amazing, I must say. You did an amazing job on building the atmosphere, and I love your descriptions. The last part was a bit puzzling at ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Blown Away

    First of all, great job! I really enjoyed reading this story, and it was great. The song's lyrics matched well with your story. But there's some things that if corrected, ...

    Oct 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, Realistic Re: I Still Miss You

    I love this story so much. So far, this is the best friendship story I have EVER read. Good job on word choices, and this is so realistic and draws ...

    Oct 20, 2013


I’d heard he had started a fistfight in one of the seedier local taverns because someone had insisted on saying the word “utilize” instead of “use".
— Patrick Rothfuss, A Wise Man's Fear