melodicatastrophe

Ahh, they're so CUTE. I wish I could draw like that =( Mel

I think I agree with Fand too. When a reader reads a poem, they expect to leave with something insightful or interesting. Asking rhetorical questions frequently does make the reader ...

I think this all relies on your religion and beliefs. You should probably ask someone in your close family, if you don't know.

After careful revising, here's the final product - Sometimes the stars sing songs- they sing of days hope still had wings And sometimes the sky keeps secrets- never speaks of ...

oh, jealousy is the newest trend the newest fad in this .. democracy hatred is a girl's best friend and rumors are the next-best accessory from the catfights to the ...

First of all, welcome, nothingface. Secondly, you may need to spell-check from time to time. The spelling and punctuation I have added in or changed is outlined in bold in ...

Looks like it's a great start, but as luver said, some of the parts sound forced. I hope to read more of this!

Haha, I had no idea. About the bluejays, I mean. I may need to do research for this poem to find a more suitable bird =D Thanks for the tip! ...

Ahh, I adore them all! There is no way I can pick my favorite, but I'll have to say the journal one in the four on top and the "muse ...

It's clever, indeed! Nice idea, and you did it pretty well. Although I liked the poem, I do agree partially with something euclidean. In some places I didn't understand the ...

Beautiful poem, but it can use a look-over. In the first stanza, I feel the words "moon" and "river" is overused. It disrupted the rhythm and flow of the poem. ...

I believe he's writing about the wall/fence that cuts between Israel and Palestine. I found no mistakes in spelling or grammar. But the words were powerful. My god, it is ...

Although it's been said a few times, I agree with the fact that this poem was way too jumpy. Like kitty15 said, I really like the first two lines. The ...

sometimes the stars sing songs; they sing of days hope had wings and sometimes the sky keeps secrets; never speaks of days of stolen memories she thinks of the years, ...

Haha, thanks everyone for the welcomes. Too many questions to answer! If anyone has a question, PM me. Mel =)