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I reall enjoyed reading this. It was vivid and well-written; although at some points I found myself stumbling over the words. I suggest reading this out loud, the syllables in ...

This is a rant, a random uneeded and time-wasting sort of thing that needs loads of help if you want to make it readable. I suggest rewriting it totally, then ...

Hey Nehad =) So great you're from Egypt! I'm from Palestine =) Hope to read your stuff hun;* Mel

^ is absolutely correct < is wondering what she is doing on a random thread V will be a poet

Cute! I really enjoyed reading this, and I hope to read more of your work. I smile, and daydream, while spying on their conversation. I'm not sure how 'spying' would ...

9/10 CUTE!

I agree with Suzanne. The first stanza could be removed as it tells the entire poem's idea at the beginning! It could do well without it. I suggest adding more ...

I read that. It shocked me. Dumbledore? No way.

Wow, for me, the meaning of this poem is quite obvious. But that could be just me (I wrote the poem, didn't I?). This poem is about living in the ...

Usually, at the weirdest times, lines come to me and I make a note to make a poem out of them later. This usually results in me forgetting the lines, ...

I agree with Dream Deep, I have never reviewed your work simply because I could not understand most of it. But this, this is great work. It's so much different ...

don't you say the past is haunting you. its haunting us all. from the blood-thumping lull of the passing minute, the fleeting year- decades gone by but still sitting in ...

I really liked this. It was quick-paced and cute, although it needs a bit of editing for grammar and punctuation. Mel

Great resource! I'll be bookmarking this for later. Mel

Sounds like they are serious. They messed up the books with the movies, and now they're trying to kill them off with a musical!?