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I really like this. It's something I'm sure many people who go by nicknames or have people mispronounce their names often can relate to. You did a good job of ...

Haha, this is cute! I really like this! :)

Hmmm. This is pretty cool. He'd never learned about friction; the imperfect pendulum of his loping gait swung on and on and on. He was ten, and when he stood ...

I kind of liked this. It's some thing a lot of people can relate to (unfortunately. I wish people didn't have to deal with things like watching a friend disappear, ...

Thanks for the comment! I liked it, sorta, I usually don't prefer this type of poetry, I like the dark stuff ya know? If you like dark stuff, then I ...

I follow this path unsure of where it will end taking the journey

Wow. This was extremely well done. I was able to dive into the story headfirst, and, I believe this was mentioned before, too, I didn't need any context. There was ...

This is an EXTREMELY good horror story. I was so scared when I finished reading it! I noticed a few grammatical errors, punctuation misplaced, etc. but the only big suggestion ...

Whoa. I was not expecting that ending. You had the beginning be completely and total bliss and joy, and then the ending was all sadness.... A few nitpicks. I could ...

:) I love these! They totally describe how I feel sometimes, and they made me laugh! Please? I'm begging. Will you accept bribes? Because I have chocolate. This is my ...

It bubbles up Through your torso Tugs at the corners Of your mouth They spread And your eyes crinkle The sound explodes From your mouth Your body shakes With it ...

Trapped in the darkness, I am longing for a light. Will you provide it?

Awesome. :) I love this! Just one nitpicky thing. On the "Six year since our founding" part, there's supposed to be an "s" after year. Other than that, it's all ...

As you try to fly reach up and touch the clouds, or better yet, the stars

I love this. This is absolutely by far my favorite poem out of all the ones I've read! Sorry, but I really can't think of anything to say other than ...