mellophone7

This is really good. I like how you capture exactly how you're feeling in the moment, and also your style of writing. I can feel everything. I didn't notice any ...

This was really good. You relayed your story very well, and I could feel everything you were talking about. Great job, and keep it up!

This was quite interesting. It's one of those poems that has a lot of hidden meaning and it makes you think. The message isn't always right there clear in front ...

This is SO beautiful. With every line you give, I get a clear image in my head with what is happening. I can't really say much else. This is a ...

Hmm. Interesting. Never seen anything like it, but that kinda made it cool. :) It does make you feel really insignificant, though, which, if you think about it, though, you ...

Okay, this is something I wrote about two months ago. This is really the most depressing thing I have ever written. I'm not even sure what I was thinking when ...

This was pretty good. I know music is really hard to try and capture in words, and this is one just way of writing about it. It's okay by itself, ...

This was beautiful and very well writ. The only thing I would say it, if you're attempting to rhyme, keep it consistent. I noticed that the first, second, and last ...

Hmm. I hate to be the downer, (but maybe it's just my brain isn't with it) but I couldn't really find the main point in this poem. I know the ...

Wow. I completely love this. Each line creates a vibrant, vivid image in my mind. It was extremely well writ. I only have one tiny nit pick. Splattered on the ...

This was really cute, but I do have some nit picks. When I was young, My thoughts rolled around like tumbleweed s . In a vast expanse of land made ...

These are pretty good, considering they come from a cell phone camera. It's annoying trying to take pictures with a cell phone. The fire picture was a bit noticeably out ...

I love these! It's always fun to take pictures of plants. :) Great job!!

Pretty good job. A few things: my senses become alive Maybe putting "come alive" would make it flow better. Also, the fact that the first stanza had four lines, the ...

Awwww, total cuteness!! This poem is SO adorable. It's simple, but that's what makes it sweet. I was thinking of an adorable little Lab puppy when I was reading it, ...