mellophone7

This is really cool. It's kind of like you're combining dreams and some sort of fairy tale. In fact, this poem reminded me of a book I read, called The ...

Hi! I really liked this piece. It's lovely tying in a person's life and a leaf's life. Flawless. I glanced through the previous reviews and saw people had already helped ...

We all wish we could go back in time and become a kid again. Me included. Unfortunately, we can't, and have to settle for the memories. I loved reading this ...

Cute, MOIMOW. Real cute. :) Yes, I loved reading this! The flow and rhythm was just great, and I didn't see any grammatical mistakes. Great job!

Wow. This is really sad, but it is also extremely well-written. A person trying to be a good sister, but in the end deciding that the one she is defending ...

Reading your poem, I'm suddenly reminded of my geography class, and how my teacher said that we should "Spend during bad times, and save during good times." Of course, ending ...

Hmm. Interesting. I've never seen a complete turnaround a fairy tale before. Usually all you see are the true love forever and ever, perfect life, that kind of happily ever ...

Loved it. This was my absolute favorite line out of the entire thing. You can't really hear me, When you're not really listening. It seems people are never listening as ...

I don't know if I'm using the right words, here, but this poem seemed very light, graceful, and airy to me. Simply beautiful. I loved it so much. I didn't ...

Wow. I love this. So deep. I could also relate to this poem, because I know a person who is basically described by this piece. She's never afraid to show ...

Short and sweet. It's not long, but it contains so much emotion in it.... I saw no errors in it, and I thought it was extremely well written. Great job! ...

Wow, this was really great. I completely loved it. One thing I would suggest, though, is maybe if you're going to add a little punctuation, trying doing punctuation for the ...

Oh, totally love this!! I can relate so well to this, as I play piano, and I absolutely love it! This was written so well, and captures exactly what a ...

This brilliant moon glows in the sky but will run when touched by sunshine.

Really, really sad, but extremely well-written. I didn't find any grammatical errors, and I noticed no problems with it otherwise. Please keep writing! Your work is excellent.