mellophone7

"Qu-ACK!" Absolute FAVORITE part! Kwantack, I LOVE this rap!!

Wow. I love it! I've never thought about writing like that before. For me, it's just been something to do whenever I get the time to do it. That's changed. ...

Hmmm. Very interesting. I've never heard headphones described that way before. Purely unique work!

My first reaction: confusion! I couldn't get what you were talking about. Then I read to the end, and I sort of ended up getting it. Are you trying to ...

I'm agreeing with everybody else so far. It was short, and it felt really cut off. Was this an introduction or, like, the start to a chapter? It felt like ...

I really like your poem! It had rhythm and rhyme, two things I like in poetry. The only comment I would make is the fourth line, that starts with "of ...

Wow. That is, without a doubt, the most depressing poem I have read yet. I think the suicide at the end was interesting, because it seemed to split the poem ...

(jaws theme starts playing) Wait! Before we go ANY farther, I need to point something out to you: you are more likely to be trampled to death by an elephant, ...