mellophone7

I usually don't like reading sad poems, but I really liked this one. It was very well written, and captured a lot of emotion in it. Great job!

When I dream, I dream of flying. Not of falling, but of soaring. I leave the ground behind, and reach up to touch the clouds, floating high in the sky. ...

I love this sooooo much! I'm a figure skater, and this is exactly how I feel most of the time, because there are several girls way younger than me at ...

This is an interesting poem. It describes very well how a person doesn't have anybody in her "happily ever after". I can feel every emotion that she is feeling as ...

Wow. I don't think I've eve read a poem with this much emotion in it. All I can say is, great work, keep it up, and never give up, even ...

Wow. You captured exactly how I feel with my parents sometimes. Great work! My favorite line: Do you know the storms that reside in my heart? Amazing piece!

I really liked this. Only one thing I would mention: I agree with a previous comment that the main theme is a little bit overused. Other than that, it's really ...

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This is an amazing poem. It really touched me, and I felt deep pity for this girl. Keep up the amazing work!! :)

I love this, and I could especially relate to it, too. I don't want to have silence (all the time); I almost always want to have music in my life ...

Interesting. You capture (as I see it) a very complicated relationship from the girl's point of view. A few mechanical things: But Couples fight, Is couples supposed to be capitalized ...

I agree with the previous comment by MissRockers. It tells a story in a simple way. I didn't find any errors in it, although the "Is it?" did seem a ...

This is a really cool piece! It perfectly captures the wish of a human being to be able to swim in the ocean with all of the other creatures. Keep ...

I read your last comment, and it seems like a really interesting way to write a poem. I've never seen one written like that. I loved this, and it was ...

I love this poem. It really touched me, and I know exactly how the person feels. Just one thing, I noticed a few places where two words got squished together. ...