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I loved this poem. The emotions in it practically leaped off the page. :) The first part confused me a little bit, though. I almost got the impression that it ...

I really liked this poem, but, again, as several comments before me stated, it lacked a structure, punctuation, and capitalization. I'm not saying you HAVE to have a structure and ...

This is really good! You're right, it does give me a kind of warm feeling when I look at it. However, I get the impression that the girl's not happy, ...

Oh, dude, this made me laugh so hard!! I love this mini story!! Great job! :)

Okay, MOIMOW, I loved this!!! I could totally see this coming from you, and the title explains it all!! One thing, at the beginning, it was a little difficult to ...

I love this! It's very deep and comparing life to a rose works very well for this. Keep writing!! :)

Kwantack, I remember you showing this to me at school!!! It is super, super cute!! I love it!!! :)

Wow. This depressed me a little bit, because it was so sad, but it was very well written, and I liked it a lot. Anybody who has experienced a close ...

I really love this poem! Perfectly saying "don't give in to temptation." Yet, what do humans do? We continually give in. Anyway, I noticed you didn't really have much punctuation, ...

I really liked this poem. This touched me, because this is how I feel sometimes. I noticed a few things, but I think the other comments already touched on them. ...

Whoa!! That is so cool! I don't really have anything constructive to say about it, so, sorry, but I just think it's awesome!! :)

What's inside is kept hidden, safe, for a good reason. Because when I open up, let others see what I think, who I truly am, I run the risk of ...

This is so cool. I've never seen anything compared like sand and glass like this before. It made for a very interesting read. It was well written, and I love ...

This shows perfectly how people can look at things and yet not SEE them. They are aware that they're there, but they don't look deep enough past the masks. In ...

Whoa, this is really good! I don't know if you were going for complete neatness on the edges, but overall, it's very cool! (Plus, it's much, much better than anything ...