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I loved this. It's a short, yet completely beautiful piece. I wish I could say more, but, really, that's about it. Keep writing!! :)

I loved this, MOIMOW. The rhyming was pretty good overall, and any mistakes I found were already pointed out to you by the first reviewer. I loved the last stanza, ...

I love this. It's so in depth, and it really talks about a relationship with God. He always loves us and is there for us, no matter what. Great job!! ...

I love this!! I'm getting a total feel of prince/princess, medieval, true love, etc. It's awesome! Don't change it! :)

I like this. The only thing is, I was a bit confused by the fact that she seemed to be putting a star inside of her, and then she's talking ...

Wow. This is beautiful. I didn't find any mistakes in it that I could see, and the flow seems pretty sound. Just one thing. |L|asting without you is the hardest ...

Wow. Biiiiiiiig words. :) Yeah, I agree with kathy45662, when she said that poems can be well written without such large words. Overall, I thought the poem was really good, ...

This poem and "This is Me" were both inspired by another poem I read called "I am a Poet", so the two that I wrote are very similar. I write. ...

Wow. I love this! It's so simple, yet inspiring.... Great job!!!! :)

I love this! I can totally relate to how you have to learn life as you go. Simple, yet well written poem. Great job!!! :)

I liked this. It tells an interesting tale from a liar's point of view. Good job!! Keep writing!!! :)

I love this. This piece describes perfectly how I feel when I'm in the middle of writers' block!! Great job capturing the words! :)

Wow. I really love this, especially since it is a very good way to comfort somebody who has just had a close friend or relative pass away. It has a ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem, mainly because abortion was nowhere mentioned in this, and in my debate class, abortion has been brought up in bills for Student Congress, and ...

I haven't seen nor heard of this "Final Fantasy" thing you were talking about, but I still loved the poem! You stretched the rhyming a bit with Tell me your ...