mellophone7

This is SO cool! I love this! Sorry, but I can't really think of anything constructive to say. I just love it! Keep on writing!!!

I really liked this. I haven't seen the movie Titanic, either, (although I know one of my friends has), but I knew almost immediately what you were talking about. It ...

This is a good starting point for a poem. I think that the flow (as mentioned before) could probably be cleaned up a little bit, because it seemed to jump ...

In a sad way, this reminds me of America, almost, because we're so focused on the outer appearance of a person, and not what's inside, and the people who have ...

Adding in that extra stanza (in my opinion) would definitely help this poem. It just helps to give a bit more background on the "friend." Great job on this poem!

This is really cool. It gave me a completely new perspective on "Merkind." I wish I had something more constructive to say, but I really didn't find any mistakes, so ...

It worked. I get an extremely vivid picture in my mind. This poem portrayed a shipwreck with perfect accuracy. There's not really much more to be said other than I ...

I love this poem. It gives me a very clear picture in my mind, and what makes it even better is that I have never seen a poem written like ...

I see the clouds gather on the horizon to drive away the sun. Pure white, they rise up and envelop the sky, covering the blue. As they draw near, bright ...

This is a very good poem, and, as stated before, it does describe life very well. I will mention that you did stretch the rhyming at some points in the ...

This was pretty good. It was very deep, and well written, but the larger words made it a little bit more difficult to understand. Try substituting those words out to ...

Hi! I liked this, but I'm still the kind of person who, when I see a bug, will squash it. It's good, though! Just a few things: This deed is ...

I love this poem. This is my absolute favorite stanza. The pen is my instrument. Words are my music. The world and more Are my inspiration. I am a poet. ...

Yay for you! This got featured!! :) I've only been a member for two months now, and I got two of my poems featured recently, too, so I was very ...

To answer EtCetera's question: I guess I never completely thought about it. When I was writing it, I kind of thought of the entire thing from the speaker's point of ...