mellophone7

Me, please! I won't be able to attend, but I am still interested in poetry. :)

Can you hear me? A whisper in the wind. Listen carefully, and you might catch the sound of my voice through the rustling tree branches, softer than swirling snow. Can ...

Oooohhh, I love this so much! This is exactly how I feel SO much of the time as a writer! Plus, you wrote it in free verse in a long, ...

I had a hard time getting into this poem. Maybe it was how long it was, or just the grammar in it. I kind of liked how you wrote it ...

Autumn fades quickly The chill of winter sneaks in With dancing snowflakes.

Wow, this is so perfect! And completely true! I absolutely love it! I like how you covered all the questions and I especially like your line Love is indescribable. So ...

Thank you for helping me with this. I always seem to have trouble separating poems into stanzas, so thanks for giving some suggestions for that. Also, looking back, the "Uh ...

This is interesting, and it was so, so cool to read. I really enjoyed it. It's very well written. I really didn't notice any errors with it, although I kind ...

I can feel it sneaking up on me again, claws extended, ready to pounce. It can silence my writing in one sweep, making the ink stop flowing, and my mind ...

I made the mistake of having dark music playing in the background while reading this. :P It's interesting to see what you keep coming up with. The only thing I ...

Okay, I just decided to try something new this time and write a poem meant to be in Spanish. I wrote it first in English, but I need help with ...

I love this poem. And, yes, I was able to figure out what it was about. :) I love reading poems that rhyme, and this one had some really good ...

This is a really good poem that shows a lot of emotion. You did a very good job with writing it. I got completely wrapped up in it, and it's ...

Unbroken sorrow swan-scattered in a dice-throw— you outlive yourself. Unfortunately, I have to agree with dante93. There's hardly anything here. I know haiku are really short, but I don't understand

This was a good start, but I also felt that it was lacking something. This verbal portrait You've painted with soft words. I can see it right in front of ...