megsug

You might want to see if you can make that a little clearer, perhaps?

It's a bug. Nate is working on it. So sorry. I'll review the whole thing when it's done.

As soon as review day's done, I'd be happy to do a huge edit for you to show you what I noticed. :) And a lot of people hate commas. ...

Gel is actually another word for girl that I was stealing from some cultures. The next episode will probably start with Merin, but I'm not entirely happy with that ending ...

Ah. That makes much more sense. No problem about the alcohol tidbit.

Thanks. xP I'm trying to keep up with this serial pace and it's killing me right now. All of your reviews have been helpful.

I was playing with a new style I saw in A Brave New World . Obviously the experiment was a flop. ;)

Thanks! I'm hoping to really shine this up later.

Thanks! Sorry about the typos. I thought I'd caught all of them. xP And I'll work on the detail bit. It hit me as I was going to bed after ...

xP I was afraid my horse stuff was all screwed up

>.> I didn't know this was submitted...

Nothing gets by Shady. xD Thank you both for your reviews.

So... I know I told you I would give you the rest of the review, but I realized that I really didn't have much more help to offer. The rest ...

:) You make me so happy.

Aw. Thank you so much. I appreciate it. Thanks for nitpicks as well. :D